Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons for address. ln other words, we have reached a stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Ever-increasing
environment
related problems are the gravest international concerns, nowadays. Some experts believe that initiatives
at
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in
countries or personal level are not effective anymore, and international community need to intervene for safeguarding
environment
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the environment
.
However
, I personally disagree as groundwork for
this
problem still requires efforts at state and personal level. State,
to begin
with, need to start new initiatives for prohibitive actions against deteriorating
environment
. Aggressive infrastructure development can lead to environmental destruction in developing countries and It is
state’s duty
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the state’s duty
to maintain proper pollution checks in
such
cases.
Additionally
,
government
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the government
should
also
come up with the policies and initiatives that focus on raising awareness about
importance
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the importance
of well-being of the natural habitat. ‘
Swach
a sample piece of cloth
Swatch
Such
Bharat Abhiyan’ is one
such
example,
this
policy was introduced by
Government
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the Government
of India in the year 2018 to improve cleanliness in the country. Citizens perhaps have the
second
most crucial role to play after country in preserving surroundings. People have the access to their home where governments
can not
can not
cannot
intervene and it becomes the responsibility of the family to keep hygiene at their homes, and
also
assure that the garbage accumulated at home is not degrading local
environment
. They should have
setup
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set up
for recycling setup in the house which will help
reducing
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reduce
overall waste generation
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the overall waste generation
per house.
Finally
, as a responsible citizen we ought to maintain cleanliness at public sites
such
as community parks, in the
neighborhood
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
. It might be true that pressure exerted from international stages
such
as the U.N.
might
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Might
help speeding up the prohibitive actions at
nation
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national
level,
however
ground work still needs to be done by local authorities or the public. Overall, it appears that organizations operating internationally may perhaps be able to build a certain amount of pressure on nations with degraded environmental
conditions
Accept comma addition
conditions, however
however
most of the patch work
for
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of
fixing
this
problem will still be done by countrymen or the country itself.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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