Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

There is a segment of the
population which
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population, which
has been
adopting
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adopted
a
dietry
of or relating to the diet
dietary
restricted solely by non-animal based
food
. Those who adopt that kind of lifestyle
usually defend
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usually defending
that
such
idea
can lead to improvements in
health
and on the
society
as a whole. I'm going to discuss the reasons for why I support that
way
ot
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of
thinking. For many generations the
idea
of eating
meat
as a
way
of improving
health
has been considered to be the common sense. That
way
of thinking lead to a growing culture of processed and easy to eat
food
, resulting in rocket numbers of fast
food
chains being installed throughout the country. Needless to say, that resulted
on
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in
a dangerous public
health
crisis. Nowadays,
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
from some of the most prestigious universities in the world indicate that over 1/3 of the population in developed countries are above their ideal weight.
Additionally
, the statistics for children facing serious
health
issues,
such
as cancer and diabetes, have grown by 30% over the course of the
last
20 years.
In contrast
to that horrifying scenario, in the
last
10 years we've seen an increasing number of people interested on looking for alternate
dietries
the specified day of the month
dates
; focused on organic and natural options,
such
as vegetables, seeds and plant-based proteins. Those who advocate that
way
of eating support the
idea
that a
society
which consumes less
meat
(or fish) will not only improve their quality of life and
health
, but will
also
reduce our carbon footprint, since there is a huge amount of energy being consumed to maintain farms, transportation and refrigeration of processed
meat
. In conclusion, our
society
have been living
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has been living
under a culture where
meat
is considered to be the best option for
dietry
of or relating to the diet
dietary
,
eventhough
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even though
hard data shows organic
food
provides better quality of life. I support the
idea
of a
society
focused on a sustainable
way
of supplying
food
to the
next
generations.
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