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machine translation is slower and less accurate than human translation and there is no immediate or predictable likelihood of machines taking over this role from humans . Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, technology is thriving and has changed people's daily tasks making process. Human
use
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uses
 digital communicators to comprehend various languages.
However
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However, this
this
 translated version of languages are not fully precise. I believe,
human
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a human
the human
 has the best brain to understand or being
translator
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translated
 for languages. New innovations help improve human lives.
For example
, The Finger scanning machine at the office construes
perticular
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
 person's presence and avoids need of
extra duty gaurd
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extra duty guards
extra duty guard
the extra duty guard
extra duty guide
extra duty grade
. In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, apple's
siri
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Siri
 recognises voice and search for things which are instructed by
person
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a person
the person
persons
. By using
such
 technologies, someone can save huge their time and efforts. In some areas machine can take place to improve routine
taks
any piece of work that is undertaken or attempted
tasks
task
takes
.
Nevertheless
, these innovations are not completely perfect.
For example
, digital
interpretor
someone who mediates between speakers of different languages
interpreter
 does not have
cognetion
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
cognition
connection
 and have
limeted
small in range or scope
limited
intellectual
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intellect
intellects
intellectually
. It might not construe local languages. Another barrier would be emotions, human can express or share their feelings to others unlike digital
interpretes
a purposeful or industrious undertaking (especially one that requires effort or boldness)
enterprise
enterprises
interprets
.
For example
, while consulting
doctors which
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doctors, which
 requires in depth conversations which only be possible by human at
other end
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the other end
. In these
area
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areas
, where human presence is necessary digital
interpretor
someone who mediates between speakers of different languages
interpreter
harldy
having rugged physical strength; inured to fatigue or hardships
hardy
 have a space. In conclusion, machine
interpretors
someone who mediates between speakers of different languages
interpreters
 can be
use
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used
 where human presence is not
necessity
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necessary
necessarily
 or
obivious but
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obvious, but
obvious but
 in major area human conversations are ideal to understand
world
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the world
 better.

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