The recent popularity of online shopping will result in the end of high street shops. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

In these recent years there has been

huge rise

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a huge rise

in online shopping.

Although

some feel that

they

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They

will be no effect

to

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on

small

business

, I

,

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,

however

, believe that there are three factors

which

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Which

will end the era of small

business

.

Firstly

, online shopping companies like Amazon, ebay offers different kinds of

installment

a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals

instalment

facilties

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

to the customers.

while

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While

I concede that even small shops offers

same kind

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the same kind

of service, the problem is that they

suppoprt

give moral or psychological support, aid, or courage to

support

only limited finance companies.

whereas

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Whereas

online

business

allows all types of finances like credit card,

over draft

a draft in excess of the credit balance

overdraft

and so on. A good

illustation

artwork that helps make something clear or attractive

illustration

of

this

is

sunday

first day of the week; observed as a day of rest and worship by most Christians

Sunday

market, In

this

market most of the small

business

do not accept

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does not accept

credit cards as they can't afford the

transcation

the act of transacting within or between groups (as carrying on commercial activities)

transaction

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charges. Another key factor is twenty four hours shopping and delivery. Many supporters of small

business

claim that many

number

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numbers

of shops in the city are open round the clock.

However

, I would argue that they are open all the

time but

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time, but

the

comfortness

things that make you comfortable and at ease

comforts

of

shoppping

searching for or buying goods or services

shopping

at your place in the midnight

is

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Is

It's

a totally different experience. Beside

this

, in many foreign countries the night temperatures

are tend

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tend

have tended

to be freezing and in

this

weather going out

for

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For

shopping is dangerous. The final and most

worriesome

not reassuring; tending to cause anxiety

worrisome

factor is expensive products. More and more small

business

often price their products high, because they have to cover all the expenses

such

as rent, labour, transport and so on.

whereas

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Whereas

online shopping rarely matter all these things. Take

Amazon

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Amazon, for

for example

, they do not have

single physical shop

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a single physical shop

single physical shops

in the whole country, as

there

of them or themselves

their

maximum operations run through online computers. In short, not only online shopping causes local

business

to go bankrupt, but they

also

change the whole shopping experience to the

next

level.

Therefore

. I agree that they will make a huge impact on local street shops.