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Band 7.5

Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter - suggest how you could help her in her home -say why you would like to do this work -explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Ma, I am writing to inform you that I can assist you with cooking and cleaning in the coming year. I saw your notice, and I am available to render the services requested. I could meal prep for the day and clean your house for 3 hours every other day during next summer. I am currently at the university , and we are usually allowed four weeks of vacation break.
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, I have planned to use
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 time to assist someone in the neighbourhood since I would like to save more money and utilise my time well. Cooking and cleaning are house chores that I grew up doing often , and I actually enjoy doing them. In general, I would be ready to start work on the first day of September next year. Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays are preferred days for me. I would not be available to engage on Tuesdays, Thursdays, Saturdays and Sundays.
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, my preferred hours are 8am to 11am. In conclusion, I am able to work throughout September. Thank you for considering me for
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 position. Should you have questions, please do not hesitate to reach out to me. I await your favourable response. Yours faithfully, Ginikachukwu Uzoekwe.

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structure
Try to keep one idea in each paragraph so the plan is clear.
planning
Be exact about time and days. If you say next summer, keep that idea, or pick September and stick with it.
style
Use a formal tone. Address Mrs Barrett correctly (not Ma).
grammar
Check small grammar and mark use, and fix spaces after commas and at the end of sentences.
content
Keep it short and clear: say what you can do, why you want the job, and when you are free in simple words.
content
The letter starts with a polite opening and has a closing.
content
It says what work you can do and why you want it.
planning
It shows set days and hours for work.
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