Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many people think that
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
or working in a foreign
country
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is the only one reason for learning a foreign
language
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, while the others think there were many reasons for learning a foreign
language
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.
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that people
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that, people
have many reasons for learning a foreign
language
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.
Initially
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, many people have many reasons for learning a foreign
language
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. They can learn for entertainment
purpose
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purpose, such
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as watching some foreign movies, chatting a foreign friend, or listening aboard music.
For example
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, my friend her name is Mint, she usually practice and learning foreign languages from the internet for
listening Korean
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listening, Korean
song (from the boy band group that she like).
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, she
do not want
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does not want
to
travelling
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travel
or working in a foreign
country
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besides
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.
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, some people are learning a foreign
language
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for travelling or working in a foreign
country
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.
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is not only one reason for learning a foreign
language
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because learning a foreign
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need a lot of
intencive
characterized by a high degree or intensity; often used as a combining form
intensive
for
motivate
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motivating
a person to learn and
pratice
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
practise
. They cannot
learning
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learn
a foreign
language
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if they do not like it. For
instsnt
a very short time (as the time it takes the eye to blink or the heart to beat)
instant
,
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first time
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the first time
that I learn English, I really hate it because I learn for IELTS exam for working in
UK
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the UK
. In the present, it is opposite, I like it more than before since I learn
for
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to
improve myself. To conclude, some people
belief
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believe
believed
that the reason for learning a foreign
language
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is travel or work in a
foreing
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
country
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, but many people think opposite.
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agree
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agrees
with people have many reasons
to
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for
learning a
foreing
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
language
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
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