Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree?

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In my opinion, there is some other way to commit a
crime
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except of indigence between people.
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, I agree with
idea
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the idea
of poverty so it is one of the important
factor
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factors
to criminality. On the one hand, there
is
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are
some other reasons to
criminal act
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the criminal act
a criminal act
criminal acts
.
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, mental disorders
are
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is
another factor which must be considered.
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, in UK 50% of criminals are suffering from mental health.
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, lack of sufficient education in young generation is another
reasons
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reason
.
Actually there
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Actually, there
is
direct link
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a direct link
between rate of
education parents
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education, parents
and
crime
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which result in dire consequences.
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, living in
countryside
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the countryside
and
also
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environmental of life can effect on people living there. It is likely even might be
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this places
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this place
these places
faced with drug dealing. So people should accept the consequences of living in
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neighborhoods
a surrounding or nearby region
neighbourhood
.
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, I
also
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believe that the most significant reasons of
crime
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is poverty.
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, having financial problems
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is
common
between
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among
people.
This
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is likely to have
detrimental effect
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
on their morality
also
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can lead to
crime
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activity. Undeniably. Recent research has shown that the African people are having economic problems. In a other words the more financial problems the more
crime
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in a way that they are faced with
high
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high crime rates
a high crime rate
crime
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rate due to armed criminal
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a these countries. In conclusion, it is true that
crime
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has a number of reasons. But in my opinion, poverty is
most significant reason
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the most significant reason
human faced in twenty-
first
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century so
that is
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why most people commit a
crime
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.
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