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Essay topics: Multinational companies are becoming increasingly common in developing countries. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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In the recent years, it has become a popular trend to open multinational businesses in the rising nations.
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 has both pros and cons.
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 essay is going to explain both positive and negative impacts of it. While looking at the advantages of starting new multinational companies in the growing countries, the
first
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 and foremost is the improvement in the unemployment rate. More factories mean more job opportunities. It leads to decrease in the poverty and raises the living standard of
people
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the people
.
Secondly
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,
increasing number
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an increasing number
 of companies
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from
in
 developed countries bring more money to the undeveloped countries in the form of tax as one nation has to pay tax to open an office in another nation which helps to raise the economy.
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, in the past, Japan and China had opened car companies in
India which
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India, which
 have declined unemployed individuals in India.
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, there are some disadvantages of running multinational businesses in the undeveloped countries in which the most important is the exploitation of the
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
. These companies pay very less wages to the employees of home countries as compared to employees of the developed countries. Apart from
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, these businesses buy raw material from these developing countries at a very cheap price which can be sold oversea at a higher value. All these factors have
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an effect
 on the economy of rising countries.
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, multinational companies cause production of waste material which is not managed and decomposed properly. It results in various
type
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types
 of pollution in the growing countries. In conclusion, I think multinational companies are both boon and bane at the same time by lowering the unemployment burden, by exploiting the
laborers
someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourers
 and causing pollution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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