The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to register a complaint about the misbehaviour of your employee at one of the Coffee shop in our city. I usually visit the Tim Hortons cafe, which is very close to my office location, in order to take a coffee and other snacks for that moment. On that day, somehow the shop is full of customers and on top of that, it's raining outside as well. While I am returning to my home from my workplace, I have gone to bring a cup of coffee since the weather is very cold. But the moment when I ordered a doughnut along with french vanilla, the staff member at the counter is not responding properly.
In addition
to that, while billing
also
, the employee not treated me well in terms of payment mode with a credit card and it seems to me like a negligence behaviour. I am requesting you to take an immediate action against that employee, and probably need to replace that kind of people with a more polite natured staff member to mingle with a diverse people and to act
accordingly
in the circumstances. Looking forward a quintessential service from that cafe
center
table consisting of a horizontal surface over which business is transacted
counter
.
Yours
Suggestion
Shareef
faithfully, shareef

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