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You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter: ● Say which edition and when did the article appear ● Explain why you lost contact with your friend ● Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch

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Dear Sir/Madam I am Alisa Jukra, I’m a big fan of your column and I read your newspaper every day. Today I’m writing
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 letter to you because the first page of the Newspaper on December 22, 2024, made my day. The agent realtor at the right corner is named Miho Hane she is my childhood friend. Miho H, was my primary school best friend when I lived in Pemberton. It has been 30 years since we lost
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. I tried to call the phone number which was shown in public. Unfortunately, it passed me to the office. They could not provide me with any information cause the system from the new workplace is not stable yet and they lost some details
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 the Malware virus. I can rarely get her
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 back. It would be very appreciated if you could give me her
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. I’m so excited to see her again before I move to Thailand next month. Could you please
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 me back via
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 email? Sincerely, Alisa Jukra

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task achievement
Include more details on how you would like the editor to assist you in reaching your friend. This could strengthen your task response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all paragraphs are directly related to the main task to keep the letter concise and clear.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion, which enhances readability.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate for the letter's context.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and suitable for communicating with an editor.
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