You recently received a letter from a friend asking for you advice on whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter .say why she will not enjoy going to college .Explain why getting a job is a good idea .Suggest the type of job that would be suitable

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Dear Mary, How are you doing? It's been a while. Hope all is well with you. Concerning the letter you wrote to me, I'd
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you
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going to college for now and get a job
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. The exorbitant fees paid in tertiary institutions these days could be quite challenging for students without a sponsor. Some students find it difficult to cope. l think you should consider taking up a job
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. I believe that
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would be more beneficial to you before advancing to college to study. With
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, you could earn some money and save up enough to pay your tuition.
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, you'd comfortably sort out upcoming bills and other pressing needs without depending on anyone. I know you're quite sociable, so, making
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. I'd suggest you pick up a job in an IT firm. You 've had the desire to become a Computer Engineer, and working in
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would expose you to the necessary skills and ideas you need. I trust you'd make
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right choice. Best regards,
Mma
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic pressures
  • financial burdens
  • tuition
  • student loans
  • uncertainty
  • work experience
  • earn money
  • practical skills
  • professional network
  • align with interests
  • growth opportunities
  • on-the-job training
  • apprenticeships
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