Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable. Others, however, feel that it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Television
has affected our
life
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lives
considerably since its invention. It has created two opposite schools of thought on the ground of its serviceability. There is one who believes it to be a source of amusement and there are others who oppose
this
notion and consider it a waste of hours.
This
essay intends to discuss both the views and will reach to a subsequent conclusion why I consider the idiot box is a source of entertainment.
To begin
with, the advent of technology and globalization has made the
world materialistic
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world, materialistic
and their schedules busy.
Consequently
, they hardly get any time for entertainment, but it is
television
that is
there to make a change in their boring and hectic schedules.
For example
, there are countless entertaining programs with different genres like comedy, news, daily soaps and discoveries around the world.
Therefore
, it serves the purpose of all categories and
also
keeps the people updated with the happenings around the world.
On the other hand
, there are masses who believe that it makes time futile because people spend their time watching televisions and keep on
procrastinate
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procrastinating
the crucial things. Thence,
this
brings instability in their decision making power and affects them physically and emotionally.
For instance
, addiction to
television
becomes so
worse
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bad
that they
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
end up being a couch potato.
Therefore
, making
television
as an inseparable twin is
creates
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creating
such
adverse effects that it lowers the productivity of the person. To conclude,
television
as
always been
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always, been
transmitting information in both audio and video format. I believe that viewing it for a certain limit can act as an entertainer and educator.
This
essay discussed how
positively
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positive
it is acting as a stress-buster and
also
discussed that misuse can lead to sluggish life.

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