Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Space

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explorations have been developed since the post- modern era and it has made a huge

transformationin

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transformation in

the various sectors of the life;

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, there remain some disagreements as to whether

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crucial for the country or the funds can be channelized to more pressing issues. I, personally, consider that it is extremely significant for countries to invest in outer

space

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studies to progress

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.

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of all, it is an indisputable fact that, many communication facilities and treatment modalities are originally developed for the

space

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research. CT

scan

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scans

,

for instance

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, which was used to analysis the picture of the moon and

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, scientist

realiased

successfully completed or brought to an end

realized

realised

realize

that it can be used in the medical field to study the internal organs. Apart from

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, communication sector is the

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

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benefited

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benefiting

tremendously by these researches. By

lounching

the act of moving a newly built vessel into the water for the first time

launching

satellites to the

space

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,

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had

revelutionised

change radically

revolutionized

the way

humen

characteristic of humanity

human

humans

communicate and the information technology. Currently, people can have conversations

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face to face and voice) with either relatives or friends on the other side of the world by using mobiles or with the internet.

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, there some people argue that, the amount which has spent can be invested to improve the public infrastructure: hospitals, educational institutions, and transportation facilities. These are the basic requirements need to be provided to the citizens of any country,

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of funding

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for

the exploration of

space

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. Developing countries, India and China, where a large proportion people lives under poverty, despite

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fact, they allocate a major portion of income to these

research

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researches

.

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, if these nations helped needy people with sufficient amount, they would contribute back to the country. By way of conclusion, even though people are differed regarding spending money to conduct

space

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research, I

,

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again reaffirm that it is better, if they could use

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for nation building and providing minimum

facilitities

a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry

facilities

to the society.