Euthanasia is the practice of ending the life of a terminally ill patient or someone in great pain. A few countries in the world allow euthanasia to be practiced by doctors, though it is still a very controversial issue. What is your opinion on the matter?

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Nowadays,many
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are curable since medical advancement has developed rapidly especially,in the
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decade.
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,some
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cannot be completely healed.We are only able to prolong patient's life leaving them with severe
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.
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,
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is another option for patients who no longer want to tolerate
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discomfort.
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, others disagree with
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option thinking it is unethical.From my perspective,I agree with
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for many reasons.
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with,Critics who disagree with
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idea argue that
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can be described as another form of murder as the process is no different.
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to say,Many religions that establish principles about karma and the afterlife have tenets banning any type of taking people's lives whether it is yourself or others.So,many countries which have strong religious beliefs oppose
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idea since
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will make doctors murderers.
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,as we are in the 21st century,many religious belief have lost their popularity because there is no scientific proof about the afterlife.Some countries
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as Switzerland have allowed
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procedure
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the patient's agreement and the doctor's judgement.
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,Some
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such
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as cancers which we are not able to cure cause dreadful
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to those patients.Morphine is the only drug
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strong enough to alleviate
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pain
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.
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,morphine has many side effects
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as respiratory depression,constipation,stomach
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and nausea.That makes the persons who received morphine never really comfortable.
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is another great choice.
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,if
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can only get worse and we do not have a treatable way,Dying will be the best answer. In conclusion,
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should be practised by doctors
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patients’ preferences.That will not cause an ethical problem because sometimes death is the best option that we could offer as long as doctors practice based on the principle which is doing no harm.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Euthanasia
  • terminally ill
  • compassionate choice
  • unbearable suffering
  • autonomy
  • right to die
  • dangerous practice
  • devalues human life
  • vulnerable patients
  • societal pressures
  • familial pressures
  • financial pressures
  • regulated and safe
  • end their lives with dignity
  • suicide
  • palliative care
  • pain management
  • ethical dilemma
  • alleviate suffering
  • preserve life
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