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The exposure of international media such as films, TV and magazines has impacts on local culture. What do you think of the impacts have been? Do you agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the 21st century
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,
 international media
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such
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 as TV and magazines
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 and entertainment industry got a great exposure and it affects every age
groups
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group
 and on our local
culure
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
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,
tradition
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 and customs. I
am partially agree
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partially agree
 that the has the advantages of impacts outweigh the disadvantages. It is true that films
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 TV and magazines are a good source of entertainment and it has been proved to be a great source of information. Nowadays
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 one can easily know about what happen in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
country
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. In short
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,
 we know about the
culture
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,
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,
tradition
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 and lifestyle of different
country
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 though various films
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 In my opinion
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 TV and films are
best method
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the best method
 to show our
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country
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country, culture
culture
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 and
lifstyle
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
lifestyles
 to the world. It can enhance the tourism of a particular
country
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 because it is easy for someone to plan their trip by watching the beauty of any
country
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 in films.
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 it can negatively
effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the local
culture
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 and
tradition
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. In todays world
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 most of the
country
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follow
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follows
 new trends and lifestyle
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 which can ultimately destroy our local
culture
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. Apart from
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 it is observed that new generation
start
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starts
 forgetting their local
culture
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bacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
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 they are greatly
influnced
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influenced
 by international media
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 As we know
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 in some
countries people
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countries, people
 start
fogetting
dismiss from the mind; stop remembering
forgetting
 their local language due to
introduction
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the introduction
 of
english language
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the English language
English language
. Most of
films
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the films
 in
these
plural of that
those
 days start showing negative things about old local
culture
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 and
also
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 told viewers to not follow these cultures. To conclude
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 it is undeniable that
international media
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the international media
 is
great help
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a great help
 for
everone but
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everyone, but
everyone but
 according to my point of view
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 they ignored our local
cultlure
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
 in order to earn more profit by showing new lifestyle and
culture
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. Due to
this
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 our future generation failed to know about their old
tradition
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.
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