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some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled.They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement

#people #waste #homes #governments #requirement
There are many people who have called into question the lack of recycling in the world.While I think, to a certain, extent governments should enforce recycling laws on households, I
also
 believe that the education about recycling is more crucial
.
Accept space
.
First
 of all, the administration needs to change people mentality about recycling.From young age, children have to work in
this
 field to learn the significance of reusing materials.
Furthermore
, education from early times, has a vast role in individual
habits
Suggestion
Habits
 which contains our lifestyle. Enlightenment is the best way for possible solutions
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