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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is by reducing the maximum speed limits on vehicles, others think there are other better ways. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is often thought by some that an excellent way to make the
road
safe
Suggestion
safest
 for users is by limiting the speed of automobiles.
Others
Accept comma addition
Others, however
however
, have a differing method other than
speed
Suggestion
the speed limit
speed limits
limit
. In my opinion, I believe that the best way to forestall accidents and make the
road
safe
Suggestion
safest
 for users us by reducing the speed
limit
 on cars. On one hand, methods have been put in place
such
 as
check points
a place (as at a frontier) where travellers are stopped for inspection and clearance
checkpoints
 where traffic officers are constantly at intersections and some on the highway to caution automobile users about their speed and give speeding tickets to those who are defaulting.
Additionally
,
road
 worthiness certificates are issued to car owners which shows your vehicle is fit for the
road
,
however
, all of these have not reduced the rate of accidents on the
road
, as drivers are seen to drive recklessly, and some with faulty cars.
On the other hand
, reducing the speed
limit
 of vehicles will go a long way to curb the excesses of drivers which I agree with.
For example
, a driver under the influence of alcohol and hard drugs will not be able to speed past the
limit
 that has been pre- programmed into his car.
Also
, vehicle users who are always in a hurry will have no choice than to adjust their schedule to accommodate the extra time it will take them to get to their destination, seeing they
can not
can not
cannot
 go faster than the car's speed
limit
. In conclusion, while some may vary their opinion, I believe that the safest method of making the
road
safe
Suggestion
safest
 for users is by reducing the speed of automobiles on the
road
.
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