Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Social networking society as a whole is becoming increasingly disjointed and fragmented as
sites
, for
instance
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instance,
Facebook
, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect
on individual people
as well as
society and local communities
. However
, while
I believe that such
sites
are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect
on local communities
With regards to individuals, the impact that online social media has had on each individual person has clear advantages. Firstly
, people
from different countries are brought together through such
sites
as Facebook
whereas
before
the development of technology and social networking Add the comma(s)
, before
sites
, people
rarely had the chance to meet or communicate with anyone outside of their immediate circle or community Secondly
, Facebook
also
has social groups which offer individuals a chance to meet and participate in discussions with people
who share common interests. On the other hand
, the effect
that Facebook
and other social networking sites
have had on societies and local communities
can only be seen as negative. Rather than individual people
taking part in their local community, they are instead
choosing to take more interest in people
online. Consequently
, the people
within local communities
are no longer forming close or supportive relationships. Furthermore
Add a comma
,
people
spend more time online with people
they have never met lace
to face and who they are unlikely to ever meet in the future. Correct your spelling
face
To conclude
, although
social networking sites
have brought individuals closer together, they have not had the same effect
on society or local communities
Local communities
should do more to try and involve local people
in local activities in order to promote the future of community life.Submitted by vireshwar20 on
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