Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Although
it is often believed that environmental issues ought to be resolved globally, some people think that solving them within a country is more proper. In my opinion, I consider that dealing with problems nationally makes a country to be independent, enhances their recognition and reduces their debts. On the one hand, taking care of environmental problems on a national scale strengthens a country, and makes her to become independent and I agree.
For instance
, it helps countries to know and understand their capabilities, and
thus
, prepares and strengthen them for future cases.
Moreover
, taking care of an issue by a nation can enhance their recognition internationally. To illustrate, the Nigerian government, in 2013/2014 was able to fight and eradicate Ebola disease without any support internationally, thereby becoming recognised worldwide, and some countries now seek their assistance whenever there is an epidemic.
Finally
, there would be reduced debts for countries who do not always seek help abroad.
This
is because getting solutions on a global scale requires much funding.
On the other hand
, some believe that some countries are very poor and
therefore
cannot deal with many difficult conditions.
In other words
, resolving most difficulties on a global scale would mean a great support for
such
countries,
hence
, enhancing their growth.
For example
, if the outbreak of Ebola in Liberia was tackled globally, it would not have spread to other countries and claiming the lives of many important persons
such
as Dr. Edith Adedayoo.
Furthermore
, corruptions in most developing countries, causes a delay in dealing with some difficult situations. To explain
further
, corrupt leaders usually appoint their fellows to work with,
thus
, embezzling most of the money allocated to granting solution to some issues without any query.
This
is not obtainable when the globe is involved. In conclusion, notwithstanding people's varied opinions, I consider being free of debts, independence and worldwide recognition as good reasons why environmental conditions should be solved within the nation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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