Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we were born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character trait. To what extent do u agree.

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Genetics is known to be the original makeup of all human beings from existence. It is argued that
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is responsible for the different personalities of all individuals,
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a
person
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's character cannot be changed neither can it be altered.
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essay will argue
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, as personas can be
developed and
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also be developed and
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be learned.
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, personalities and individual
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
can be developed.
people
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People
who believe that one's attitude is
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of their genes, accept
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because according to science genes are usually passed down from generations to generations and
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, whatever character a child displays is most likely to be traced to the family. Despite
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, characters can be imbibed.
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, if a child is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
trained in a certain way of life.
from
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From
his or her early stage of life, the child is likely to develop
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attitude into an adult.
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indicates that genes are not a factor of a
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's nature.
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, the way a
person
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act can be learned.
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, my friend has become very cautious since she came back
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to
from
South Korea after her
post graduate
of or relating to studies beyond a bachelor's degree
postgraduate
degree. She revealed that in South Korea, courtesy is important to their culture and
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, she learned to be very warm to people around her.
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in fact debunks the concept of genes being responsible for people's attitude. In summary, despite the fact that genes can be passed through time, a
person
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's composition is more associated with what he or she has developed and learnt over the years.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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