Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both side and give your opinion.

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Money
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play
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plays
an important role in human
being
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being's
life
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. So, every
person
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should understand
value
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the value
of
money
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. Apart from it, where we need of
money
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, we should use
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money
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the money
.
Otherwise
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,
money
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should storage for essential things. I would like to elaborate my opinion and both sides views on these
essay
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essays
. To commence with,
first
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view in
this
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essay is the saving
money
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. Conservation
money
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make
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makes
secure
life
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for
future
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the future
.
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- newfangled era full of fierce competition, where people
chass to each
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chose each
chose to each
other because they want to attain success in their
life
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. So, safeguard
money
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help those people who want to obtain good skill, it is
very herculean task
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a very Herculean task
very Herculean task
the very Herculean task
to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
skills without
money
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. In consequence, reduction
money
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will use in every field like in education, household expenditure and many more.
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,
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second opinion
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a second opinion
is that spending
money
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is the best for
enjoy
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enjoying
life
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. Generally people believe In present time
instead
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of future. So they spend
money
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to collect happy in different ways,
such
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kind of people have
not
referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
aim of
further
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life
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.
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- youth
go
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goes
to club and disco for
entertain
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the entertain
of
life
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.
Moreover
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, they sterling
money
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on
unnecessaries
not necessary
unnecessary
ways, they do not bother about following days as well as they do not alert about
up coming
of the relatively near future
upcoming
bad situation, which fell down worse impact on
human being
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human beings
a human being
the human being
.
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, modern teenager will be extravagant, their
life
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are not safe and they have to face myriad problems in
life
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without
money
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. On my notion, I would like to say that saving
money
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is better than extravagant. There are ample reasons behind it, primarily, if we have used to saving
money
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for
further
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lives, we would not need to take tension in our
life
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because we have made preserve
life
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on the half of saving
money
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. Maintain economy is not only use for
us but
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us, but
also
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a needy
person
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,
apart
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a part
of it, we can help those
peole
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
who need more of
this
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money
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and we can take blessing of that
person
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.
Last
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but not least, saving
money
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is
usefull
being of use or service
useful
in
worse situation
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a worse situation
worse situations
like drought earthquake and without telling situation and so on.
As a result
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, people can be economically safe due to storage
money
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.
In addition
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to it, we can buy expensive things which
has
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have
importance in our
life
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. To cap it all, I have discussed all
aspect
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aspects
of saving and spending
money
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. I still argue that every
person
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should save
money
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for
future
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the future
, so that
,
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,
we can fulfil
desire
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a desire
in our
life
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and we should save for extravagant
.
Accept space
.
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