Some people prefer to save money. Others prefer to use their money on things they will enjoy. What is the best approach towards money? Discuss both side and give your opinion.
Money
play
an important role in human Suggestion
plays
being
Suggestion
being's
life
. So, every person
should understand value
of Suggestion
the value
money
. Apart from it, where we need of money
, we should use money
. Suggestion
the money
Otherwise
, money
should storage for essential things. I would like to elaborate my opinion and both sides views on these essay
.
To commence with, Suggestion
essays
first
view in this
essay is the saving money
. Conservation money
make
secure Suggestion
makes
life
for future
. Suggestion
the future
For example
- newfangled era full of fierce competition, where people chass to each
other because they want to attain success in their Suggestion
chose each
chose to each
life
. So, safeguard money
help those people who want to obtain good skill, it is very herculean task
to Suggestion
a very Herculean task
very Herculean task
the very Herculean task
recieve
skills without get something; come into possession of
receive
money
. In consequence, reduction money
will use in every field like in education, household expenditure and many more.
Furthermore
, second opinion
is that spending Suggestion
a second opinion
money
is the best for enjoy
Suggestion
enjoying
life
. Generally people believe
In present time instead
of future. So they spend money
to collect happy in different ways, such
kind of people have not
aim of referring to the degree to which a certain quality is present
no
further
life
. For instance
- youth go
to club and disco for Suggestion
goes
entertain
of Suggestion
the entertain
life
. Moreover
, they sterling money
on unnecessaries
ways, they do not bother about following days as well as they do not alert about not necessary
unnecessary
up coming
bad situation, which fell down worse impact on of the relatively near future
upcoming
human being
. Suggestion
human beings
a human being
the human being
Consequently
, modern teenager will be extravagant, their life
are not safe and they have to face myriad problems in life
without money
.
On my notion, I would like to say that saving money
is better than extravagant. There are ample reasons behind it, primarily, if we have used to saving money
for further
lives, we would not need to take tension in our life
because we have made preserve life
on the half of saving money
. Maintain economy is not only use for us but
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us, but
also
a needy person
, apart
of it, we can help those Suggestion
a part
peole
who need more of (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
this
money
and we can take blessing of that person
. Last
but not least, saving money
is usefull
in being of use or service
useful
worse situation
like drought earthquake and without telling situation and so on. Suggestion
a worse situation
worse situations
As a result
, people can be economically safe due to storage money
. In addition
to it, we can buy expensive things which has
importance in our Suggestion
have
life
.
To cap it all, I have discussed all aspect
of saving and spending Suggestion
aspects
money
. I still argue that every person
should save money
for future
, so thatSuggestion
the future
,
we can fulfil Accept space
,
desire
in our Suggestion
a desire
life
and we should save for extravagant .
Accept space
.
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