exposure to international media like T.V, flims, magazines etc, has had significant impact on local culture. Do advantages overwright the disadvantages.

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Media is a place where everything is to be
expose
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exposed
with
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to
everyone whether is it beneficial or
hazardeous
involving risk or danger
hazardous
, while, in current days the media like T.V,
flims
a form of entertainment that enacts a story by sound and a sequence of images giving the illusion of continuous movement
films
any many more which all have higher influence on our local folks, whereas it has some great amount of positive impacts, somehow it has other repercussions too, in following essay it will
elaborated
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elaborate
in following paragraphs. To embark with
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
advantages, the
first
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is that by using it
one
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can get instant news no matter of which corner it comes, we can get any news of any field
on
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of
media which contain all the details of that particular incident.
In addition
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, the connectivity with other
culture
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plays pivotal role in our local masses and it has huge positive outcomes: expansion of
knowlwgde
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
, higher education and understanding of others
culture
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and tradition, helpful to get idea of
histroy
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the history
history
of others.
For instance
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, in
one
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college the students of science stream who all were willing to get the truth behind the success of 'Mission Mangal',
fortunatley
by good fortune
fortunately
, the film was
produce
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produced
on it so, by the dint of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
it's
students became to know about the story of that mission which can be taken as an epitome. Another point to be
consider
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considered
about the same
situatuin
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
situation
situations
is that, if any person want any creative idea, thoughts so, from here
one
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can get
easiyl
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
and it can be applied
on
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in
to
their new creative work.
Moreover
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, as
a
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an
influence of others
culture
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the local people become to follow their lifestyle which
ultimately convert
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ultimately converts
their lifestyle and they can easily
developed
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develop
their
living quality
Accept comma addition
living, quality
of life, while it comes to in educational sector the media is
one
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of the biggest weapon to improve the quality of
one
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particular board by following the foreign education system. To cite an example, the state university of Gujarat follows the exam method which is same in
University
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the University
of Cambridge.
Nonetheless
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, as every coin has its two sides, in same way
media
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the media
has
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have
also
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two sides,
media
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the media
is culpable for some ramifications which are deleterious for our
culture
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, when the teenagers start following the trend they might have some unusual outcomes. They change their behaviour towards their ancestors and that situation is against of our traditional
culture
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. To exemplify, the survey conducted in
one
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school that, the usage of media is
been
the state or fact of existing
being
increased in students, they become uncontrolled from their parents
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
it
it is
it's
all due to social media. To conclude,
althought
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
,
media
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the media
has vast sources of knowledge
for
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of
every kind of person and which all are ubiquitous, somehow they all have some negative impacts too.

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