There are people who suffer from poverty in every country. What do you think the reasons for poverty are in your country and what do you think can be done to help these impoverished people?

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People

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around the world that want to learn a new

language

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can find some difficulties, in

order

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to learn it. The reality is many could be the reasons, to mention some of them the need to learn a new

language

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people

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like to learn a new languages, and so on.

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; it is necessary to take into account

people

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learn in different ways, and

people

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have different intellectual profiles. In

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to contextualize the real problem that we have in our country, Colombia includes teaching

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from primary to secondary, in all the schools of the country, but many

students

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finish their schools, and they are not able to communicate in

English

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. The implementation of programs in

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to achieve the

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language

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involves all the schools, and one of those programs is called bilingual Colombia.

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plan pretends to 2025 every single student can communicate more easily, and they could get better opportunities of job, and, professional opportunities as well.

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saber pro test, (2015) the results that showed that test was not enough. The

students

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of 11th

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were not able to understand, the

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language

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. Even the average was not enough

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expect it. Those could be a brief answer about the student´s

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learning, but in my point of view there is something more that the government had not taken into account.

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Howard Garner human been has 7 multiple intelligences in which we found. Visual-spatial: it means

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with

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intelligent can draw, do jigsaw, puzzles, read maps, daydream, and many more. Those activities they can do easily. Bodily-kinesthetic: it involves use the body effectively, like a dancer, they like moving, making things, they communicate well through body

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. Musical:

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with get

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intelligent show sensitivity to rhythm, and sound, they may study better with music. Interpersonal:

students

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can learn through interaction, they have many friends empathy for others, they can be taught through group activities, seminars, dialogues. Interpersonal: these learners tend to be shy, they have wisdom, intuition, and motivation,

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strong confidence. Linguistic:

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with

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intelligent like reading books, playing word games, making up poetry or stories, they often think in words. Logical Mathematical: they think conceptually, abstractly, and they like to experiment, solve puzzles, and ask comic questions. In mi point of view, and

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the information mentioned before, there is something that really worry me. I can understand if the

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learn

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from first

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to eleven

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at the end

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of their process in the school, they are not able to understand basic things in

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. For that reason I would like to investigate which of those 7 multiple intelligences the

students

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of seventh

grade

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of John F Kennedy School need to develop a little bit more in

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to learn

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easier, and property. Is that what I will pretend to found out with

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proposal research.

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research arose because of the practice that I have been doing, throughout

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semester in the Jfk School,

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seventh. I have been observing that situation. And I realized there are many

students

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with different abilities,

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

524 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Economic Disparities
Unemployment
Underemployment
Education Inequality
Healthcare Inequality
Financial Instability
Cost of Living
Social Welfare Programs
Government Policy
Geographic Disparities
Development
Infrastructure
Steady Income
Basic Needs
Cycle of Poverty

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