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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

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One important capability of being rich is the ability to help others without any hesitation. One can be rich in several ways. It could be through the ancestral wealth or that obtained through one's own effort. One can use their money in many ways. But only good people with a pure heart tend to help others without a
second
 thought. A rich man,
for example
, can spend his money lavishly by doing whatever he likes. A lot of ways are open
such
 as in a pub, shopping malls, gambling
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, etc. But it takes a really great quality of mind to help others. Nowadays, many celebrities are a part of the charity
programs
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program
 that give them satisfaction to a great extent apart from spending their money for their needs only. In my opinion, it is the greatest thing one can do in their
living
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lives
. It not only gives you a chance to help the
poor but
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poor, but
also
 brings light to your life.

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