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You have just spent a holiday with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

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Dear Janice, I'm grateful that we got the chance to spend
last
 week together and tried the new restaurant for eating. It’s been a great time together.I feel rejuvenated after
this
 stay. I hope your family and girlfriend are all well. I actually have a
favor
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 to ask you and I hope you don't mind. The fact is that I left my
wallet
 at your house and I'll be so grateful that if you could check it at your place and send me back. When I was packing my bag, I put my
wallet
on
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 the safe and forget to pick it. I feel sorry for being
scatterbrain
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. I did not realize it until I reached home as my tickets were already booked and my wife picked me from the airport. Can you please give my
wallet
 to Jason,Currently he is staying at Fairmont Royal York
.
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It would be great if you can go to the hotel and give him my
wallet
 on Saturday as he is coming back
next
 week.I will owe you a launch for
this
.I would really appreciate it. I'll be thinking of you and the family. Your friend, Neha
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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