Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other sorts of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Economic growth concerns most of governments all over the world. The majority of them strongly believe that the only way of development is to pay attention to
this
issue, while some people disagree. They opine other progress,
such
as cultural has the same value as money. I agree with the
second
idea to some extent, and in
this
essay, both views will be discussed.
However
, a wealthy man might not be prosperous, a poor one is absolutely miserable. On one hand, from the point of view of governments, the industry is the drive of the
economy
. Productive and qualified industry leads to export which means earning more money and the amount of money distributed per person increases.
For instance
, men with higher incomes, which caused by the administrative section efforts on the
economy
, maybe more satisfied,
therefore
the entire society becomes healthier.
On the other hand
, it can be observed the rate of depressed people's growth and it has nothing to do with the upward trend of their income usually.
This
reveals the number of earnings not only cannot guarantee happiness, but
also
is the cause of emotional diseases.
This
shows policymakers must take action on other aspects of their people
such
as culture or communication skills improvement.
For example
, official USA statistics illustrate that the working hours in America peaks significantly,
although
in the same period the family or friend’s reunion hours per week plummets almost to 30 minutes which can cause several serious problems in behaviour.
Thus
,
this
point should be considered that the main goal of increasing the size of the
economy
is reaching a better life, not a gloomy one. To summarize the article,
although
economic growth should be the
first
priority of governments, the other sides of the nation should not be forgotten and those are as vital as monetary policies. In future states must distribute their effort on all characteristics of their folks whereas focusing on the
economy
specifically.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic progress
  • standards of living
  • employment opportunities
  • national security
  • social progress
  • healthcare
  • education
  • social equality
  • social disparity
  • environmental sustainability
  • climate change
  • technological progress
  • cultural progress
  • quality of life
  • cultural heritage
  • national identity
  • social cohesion
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