some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome culture differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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ctor of the society is of the

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that foreigners ought to respect cultures and traditions of the

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, others argue that various cultures should be welcomed by the host

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. I am of the belief that the latter point of

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is advantageous. In the following lines, both points of

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discussed along with my perspective.

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with, restricting visitors to follow the local

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has a substantial merit, which is preserving the identity of the

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t be influenced by the foreign activities, and these laymen may assist in spreading alien behav

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. Saudi Arabia is an exemplary

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which restricts drinking alcohol within its boundaries because of religious reasons.

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reflects that respecting the local

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has a pivotal role in maintaining its identity. Despite the aforementioned prospect, others and I

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that countries should welcome visitors and their own behaviours.

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is because the more the diversity within the

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, the more its citizens are tolerant, and they respect other concepts.

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, as per an article published by The Guardian, around 70 % of the Canadians do not have a criminal record because they are raised in a

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that respect the odds. Not only does allowing diverse traditions encourage tolerance, but it

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broadens the citizens' horizons, and it boosts their cognitive skills.

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accentuates the concept that allowing

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a tremendous positive impact on the individuals. In conclusion, having discussed both points of

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, it can be reiterated that despite the fact that some countries may have a logical reason to refuse visitors' cultures, other countries have reaped the benefits of the

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rsity. I believe that welcoming foreigners will lead to a plethora of blessings to any

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. It is recommended that governments raise the laymen awareness about diverse cultures, if they aspire to strength the bonds among its individuals.