The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, interconnected network not only impact on the way information approach to
users but
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users, but
also make
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also makes
unprecedented facts.
This
essay will discuss a main problem which addicted to
vital
being actually such in almost every respect
virtual
world
and consider balance
time
using
Internet
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the Internet
as the best solution. In modern
life
,
Internet
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the Internet
play
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plays
a vital role in
workings
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the workings
and daily routines,
hence
people have more depending on it. Since individuals spent a great deal of
time
every day on
digital
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the digital world
world
, they tend to have a sedentary and isolated lifestyle.
This
means that, people have less quality
time
for family and other relationships, leading to detrimental
health
.
For instance
, according to a report which is conducted in 2018 by We Are Social organization, Vietnam peoples consumed at least 7 hours per day for using Internet with 2.5 hours
for
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of
social
network
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networking
, especially Facebook and
Youtube
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YouTube
. There are
number
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a number
of solutions for that, yet the best solution is incentive to have
healthy
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a healthy life
life
. In order to have a good
health
, reducing using Internet for entertainments
are
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is
necessary. In fact, by
balance
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a balance
the balance
between
vital
being actually such in almost every respect
virtual
world
and real
world
, people will have healthy
life
contrary to ill
life
which causes from staring at screen for watching films, search webs or so on.
For example
,
instead
of consuming 3 hours sitting in front of screens for recreations, people can do exercise, hang out with their friends or talk with their relatives which help them reduce stress as well as improve their
health
. In conclusion, using Internet
bring
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brings
many
benefits meanwhile
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benefits, meanwhile
also
create countless problems, especially people addicted to
Internet
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the Internet
. By applying balance
time
method for using
Internet
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the Internet
, people will get advantage form Internet as well as have a good
health
.
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