It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A controversial issue in todays world relates to promoting the health of citizens. Some argue that we must prevent illnesses by investing in people's health while others argue that we can treat them. In my opinion, preventing is by far a better option than curing. The government should spend money on providing easy and affordable gyms. A place in every company or

appartment

a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house

apartment

where individuals are forced or pushed into doing an exercise. Having physical activity can help people with many pains or diseases.

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, if

eveyone

all people

everyone

schedules a well-maintained

work out

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

workout

program for themselves or with the help of trainers it will help with not having to struggle with many illnesses

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

in a young age.

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, the government should take away the tax on healthy foods and increase the tax on unhealthy foods. Currently, unhealthy foods which will cause many illnesses

such

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as

diabites

a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst

diabetes

and cancer are much cheaper than healthy foods like greens and grains.

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, the public money should

also

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be spent on

advertisments

a public promotion of some product or service

advertisements

, free

classess

a collection of things sharing a common attribute

classes

classics

and application that will help families to gain knowledge on how to live a better and healthier lifestyle along with at home group

excercises

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercises

exercise

and meal plans that

every one

all people

everyone

can enjoy. As a conclusion, while illnesses and diseases will always be inevitable helping ourselves to maintain a healthier life is always a better

opition

the right to buy or sell property at an agreed price; the right is purchased and if it is not exercised by a stated date the money is forfeited

option

than having to cure. I completely agree with the argument that

governemnt

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

fundings should be used to prevent illness and promote the overall public health.