You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: Describe the details of the problems - How are these affecting your family - Ask for possible solutions

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Dear Mr. James, Hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

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letter to inform you about the problem that we are facing in the

appartment

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apartment

. The taps of

bathroom

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the bathroom

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and kitchen

are

Unnecessary verb

apply

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continuesly

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continuously

leaking

andand

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and

its

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their

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sound disturbs our sleep. The shower is

also

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not working properly.

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Moreover

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Moreover,

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The locks of the main door

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are

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not aligned properly and give us the feeling of

insecurit

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insecurity

everytime

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every time

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In addition

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this

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, there are lots of bugs and

cockraoched

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cockroaches

in the

apparment

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apartment

, these are very

horible

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horrible

, as we cannot leave our kids alone there. yesterday my daughter was bitten by the bugs

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apply

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and got

allergy

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an allergy

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. All the problems

needs

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need

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immediate action. Please send Pulmber and

carpenter

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the carpenter

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to address the problem of leakage as soon as possible.

Meanwhile

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for

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pest control

pestcontrol

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pestcontrol,

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we have

stay

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to stay

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out 7-8 hours from our apartment. It would be very helpful if you

can

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could

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give us one bedroom to stay

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apply

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the

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for

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pest

controlling

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control

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. I hope you will

undersatnd

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understand

my problems. Hoping for prompt action from

you

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your

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side. Yours Sincerely Jashan

jshnjawanda1Tue Feb 11 2025

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Language

Try to correct typos throughout the letter (e.g., 'continuesly' to 'continuously', 'insecurit' to 'insecurity', 'horible' to 'horrible', etc.).

Structure

Reorganize your letter for clearer flow. Consider addressing each problem in its own paragraph. This will improve clarity and coherence.

Content

You provide a detailed description of the problems, which shows good task achievement overall.

Tone

Your tone is polite and respectful throughout the letter, which is suitable for the context.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

173 words

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You have rented an apartment recently, but you are facing some problems. Write a letter to the landlord: Describe the details of the problems - How are these affecting your family - Ask for possible solutions

Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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