Children can learn effectively by watching television. therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The effectiveness of watching television is a very debatable subject.

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some people believe that children learn better when they regularly watch

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programmes,

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some others are of a different school of thought.

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essay will discuss both sides of the

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in detail. Some parents feel that self learning through television programmes is very important for a child's growth and development.

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is because children are exposed to a lot of educational

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content, both

locally and internationally which broadens their

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horizons

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this

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helps to improve their language skills.

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, in Nigeria, many kids benefit from having access to

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content as

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allows them to learn a variety of things and

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improve their communication skill. In short, many parents believe that it is more beneficial for their kids to watch

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regularly because of all the things that they would learn.

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, some parents prefer their children to learn through traditional methods

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with the environment. Most parents in

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category are from the X generation category, these

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of parents do not believe in technology.

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example research

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example, research

shows that parents that are 40 years and above find it difficult to embrace technology

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result they

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result, they

believe their children should learn by interacting directly with the environment. Parents in these

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. therefore, they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

Your opinion

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

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