Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

There is an increasing number of tourists who are willing to travel to uninhabitable destinations these days.
Although
visitors of
such
places may struggle with danger and hardship, they will
also
gain significant experiences that will help them in their lives. In my opinion, people who have
such
experiences will become more confident.
Traveling
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Travelling
to difficult locations could be dangerous. Since
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
are totally unfamiliar with
such
new places, there is a huge chance for them to involve in an accident.
Furthermore
, wildlife could bring them many different unpleasant situations.
For example
, visitors could face with a wild animal
such
as a polar bear in North Pole or a lion in
Amazon rainforest
Suggestion
the Amazon rainforest
.
Therefore
, some believe that people have to avoid visiting
such
dangerous destinations.
On the other hand
, there are some people who claim that visiting locations which are physically difficult to reach may lead to increasing one's
confident
Suggestion
confidence
. Why? Because they will discover their mental and physical abilities by going through
such
hard situations which leads to increase their
confident
Suggestion
confidence
. An experiment conducting by university of Tehran shows that seventy percent of people who were highly self-confident had a chance to visit some areas
such
as Maranjab desert, Lut desert or Damavand mountain.
For instance
, they went camping in
such
places for more than two nights. I personally agree with
this
point of view because I myself had the opportunity of doing
such
activities. Since
then
, I truly feel more confident. In conclusion, while some people are against visiting challenging areas due to danger and detrimental effects it may cause, I believe it
ultimately enhance
Suggestion
ultimately enhances
has ultimately enhanced
one's personality specially her confidence.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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