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Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of the car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having a car.

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Task2: Even though
globalization
 affects the world’s economies in a very positive ways
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its negative side should not be forgotten.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. In
this
 competitive era,
globalization
 is a phenomenon which means that
world
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the world
 has become integrated economically
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socially and culturally through the advancement of technology.
However
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it is often believed that global integration of economies provides considerable benefits for international
economies but
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economies, but
 its adverse impacts cannot be overlooked.So
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this
 essay will
highlights
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highlight
 the brighter as well as
darker
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the dark
 side of
this
 trend in ensuring paragraphs. To initiate with
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how
globalization
 has contributed to the world’s economies positively.
First
 and foremost,
globalization
 has created greater job opportunities for
the people worldwide as
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people worldwide as the
 multinational companies established their
business
 and branches all across the world that provide employment to
large group
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a large group
large groups
 of dwellers.
As a result
,
unemployment rate
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the unemployment rate
unemployment rates
 and poverty will reduce at global level. For an instance, according to survey by Oxford University, observed that
unemployment rate
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the unemployment rate
 is dwindled by twice than ever before due to worldwide
business
.
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On
 the downside
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,
this
 phenomenon may
also
 have certain drawbacks.One potential dangerous drawback is an adverse impact on level
business
 as with the impact of international
business
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more and more products are being available in the market.
Consequently
, local traders are not capable to compete and might not survive in
long run
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the long run
 and
also
 caused
disappearance
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the disappearance
 of local
business
. To cite an illustration
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in a recent research
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it is observed that 60% of local
business
 closed due to the incorporation of large companies. To recapitulate, I firmly convinced that
although
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,
globalization
 has detrimental effects on local traders but pros are more prominent and
also
 a welcoming trend due to
advantages
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the advantages
 it offers.
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