Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

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Dear Mr. Karam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am writing to express about my dissatisfaction of the bus service number 382 located in the area 14. I am a regular customer on the bus, and I always was satisfied with the qualify of service.

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two weeks the bus was always behind schedule.

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, the hygiene in the bus gone worse, I am always noticing plastic bottles and tissue on the bus floor and under the seats causing a bad smell. The unreliability of the bus is truly affecting my schedule. Due to the driver's lateness, I have arrived late to work four times for the past two weeks.

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, the bus ride is becoming uncomfortable with all the garbage and the smell. I really appreciate if you can solve

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problem and I request that you do all

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possible to return the service quality of the bus the way it was previously

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both punctuality and hygienic states. Looking forward for your swift attention to

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matter.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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181 words

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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?

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