some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

In

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modern

days

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day

of

living it

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living, it

is quite important to give more significance to the practical skills rather than learning about the facts. Many people often raise their voice against the institutions that doesn’t teach practical skills and prioritize the syllabus knowledge for all aged ranging from primary education up until the time students go to universities. I personally believe in educating the young society with the skills that are required to survive in

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modern era rather than giving prominence to the

stereo type

a conventional or formulaic conception or image

stereotype

of teaching. It is the responsibility of the schools to identify talents in individuals and encourage them at a very early age which will help them to succeed and shape their future in a right way. When I was doing my bachelor’s I had an opportunity to be a part of the inter-

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collegiate

competition that was conducted at a university level representing the institute I study with.

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competition was a real test about our managerial skills that are

required to sustain in

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required to sustain

the current corporate companies. I was able to work well with the team had and accomplished the task very successfully. It would not have been possible for me to do

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if I had not worked with teams before.

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skill was developed in the school when I had to captain my team for a game of

basketball which

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basketball, which

helped me realize that I was good at managing the team to get things done. To conclude, educating and helping

younger generation

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younger generations

the younger generation

acquire the practical skill is

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more important

rather than emphasizing on the textbook learning.