At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Improvement of the health care

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instrumentality that combines interrelated interacting artifacts designed to work as a coherent entity

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in the 21st century has led to

low mortality rate

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the low mortality rate

in young

people which

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people, which

in turn has led to a growing

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of the young

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in countries worldwide. Most countries today witness more

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of young people and less of older people.

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situation. One advantage of a larger percentage of young adults when compared to the old in a country is the increase in

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the workforce

. Most countries in the world with a vibrant

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labour force

today

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owe it to a huge

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of the younger

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. Research reported in the media claims that the quality of workforce seen in

developed

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developing

countries can be attributed to the

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of young people.In short, it can be said that the large

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of young adults can be equated to

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improve

human resource

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, having more young people in a country can lead to more innovation.A case in point is that the minds of young adults are known to be more vibrant, flexible and energetic.

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minds undoubtedly make breakthroughs in scientific research, medicine and academics. A recent poll in the United States discovered that most innovations in the

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fields were mostly made by the teeming

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of young minds. A rise in the

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of the young without a doubt leads to innovation in every society. Despite these positive impacts, there are drawbacks. A larger young

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might not be favourable to under- developed countries.

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an active

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of young brains leads to innovation and a strong workforce, but when there is no good labour market to absorb these intelligent minds, it invariably leads to increased

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of dependants.

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, most

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world countries with a high proportion of young adults, compared with the

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of older people surprisingly record a high dependency ratio. In conclusion,

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there are positives and negatives related to both sides,

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the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

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