People nowadays are not fit and active than the people from the olden days. Discuss the causes for this situation and suggest some possible solutions.

It has been observed that people of

this

age are not as fit and active as

people

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the people

that lived some decades ago.

Meanwhile there

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Meanwhile, there

are some factors responsible for

this

trend, few of which will be discussed and the possible solutions will be stated

also

. One of the reasons why we have less fit and less active people now compared with the past is the nature of jobs that people are doing in the

recently

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recent

times. A large number of people sit in the office from morning till evening working with the computer systems. The advancement in technology has deprived a lot of people from engaging in

works

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the works

that involve physical activities and

as a result

, made most people less active and less fit. Some examples of

such

jobs that involve limited physical movements are customer service jobs

tellering

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tillering

tailoring

, secretary, teaching, accounting, e.t.c.

Meanwhile many

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Meanwhile, many

people are involved in jobs like farming, fishing, trading which involved a lot physically activities in the past and

this

made them to be more active and fit. Another factor responsible for less active and less fit people nowadays is nature of foods that are now being consumed. Most people hardly have enough time to prepare healthy food and

as a result

eat so many canned foods which contain preservatives and some other chemicals that are injurious to the health.

This

had made quite a number of people to be

obessed

having or showing excessive or compulsive concern with something

obsessed

abused

obese

,

hence

, reducing how active and how fit people now are. A recent statistic shows that three out of every four persons are

obessed

used improperly or excessively especially drugs

abused

in the United States of America.

This

was not the case some 50 years ago when people had time to

prepared

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prepare

healthy meals. In order to reverse

this

trend and increase the actives and fitness of

people

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the people

of the present, it is suggested that people should visit the gym to work out on

regular basis

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a regular basis

, probably, 3 to 4 times in a week. It is

also

advised that people should start to create time to cook and eat healthy foods and

also

consciously watch their Body Mass Index (BMI). I believe that if

this

can be done religiously,

people

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the people

of

this

age can become as active and fit as people of the olden age.