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Undoubtedly governments of
developed
Suggestion
developing
nations should share the responsibility of helping less fortunate nations. Different measures exist, ranging from market access to direct financial payments or even medical
assistance
.
This
essay will explain why certain measures are inherently better than other methods.
Firstly
, the most adequate manner to assist the lesser developed countries is not through health or education ‘
hand-outs
an announcement distributed to members of the press in order to supplement or replace an oral presentation
handouts
handouts'
handout's
’.
This
method is flawed and only offers temporary relief from long-term challenges;
also
this
assistance
can be cut at any moment, leaving the country stranded.
For example
, economical help from the UK to disadvantaged regions in Africa has gradually been reduced since the onset of the financial crisis.
Although
some parts of the continent may be better educated or in better health, the benefit was short lived,
thus
leaving the countries of Africa to look for other donors. Commerce is without doubt the most essential type of
assistance
that can be given. If the lesser developed country has the opportunity to develop trade,
then
it will build strong capabilities to serve it for the long term. These strengths can develop the local economy and are more reliable than education or health.
For example
, while trading with
the richer
Suggestion
the richest
country the government can search for other foreign markets to trade with.
This
would offer more stability and diversification for the nation. To conclude,
assistance
is definitely necessary for the poorer regions;
however
, ‘hand-outs’ are short-term solutions. The optimum solution is to offer market access so the region can produce products and generate regular income.
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