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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows that comparison between global
population
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percentages
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 and
distribution
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the distribution
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 of
wealth
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 among the continents and additional countries. In the graph, there are five continents - North
America
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, Europe, Africa,
LAtin
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Latin
America
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 and
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the Carribean
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Carribean
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Caribbean
 and Rich-Asia Pacific - and two
contries
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countries
 - China and India. Compared to
population
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percentages
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 among
teh
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the
sort
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sorts
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, China has
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the higest
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higest
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highest
population
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 compared to
other
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others
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. Following
to
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apply
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China, the other Asia Pacific and India are
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to
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. The Rich Asia-Pacific has
lowest
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the lowest
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population
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percentages
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. But the distribution of
wealth
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 by region are following to
those
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that population ratio
those population ratios
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population
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 ratio.
The
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apply
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North
America
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 has around 34
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percentages
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per cent
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 of global
wealth
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.
Following to
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apply
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North
America
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, there are Europe and the Rich-Asia Pacific are followed.
This
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 chart shows that the
population
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 of
percentages
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 and distribution of
wealth
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 in the world are not relatively increasing. Even if
teh
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the
 country or continent
have
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has
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 a lot of
population
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 compared to others, it shows that the
wealth
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 is not following the
population
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percentages, wealth, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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