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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart shows that comparison between global
population
percentages
 and
distribution
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the distribution
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 of
wealth
 among the continents and additional countries. In the graph, there are five continents - North
America
, Europe, Africa,
LAtin
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Latin
America
 and
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the Carribean
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Carribean
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Caribbean
 and Rich-Asia Pacific - and two
contries
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countries
 - China and India. Compared to
population
percentages
 among
teh
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the
sort
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sorts
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, China has
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the higest
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higest
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highest
population
 compared to
other
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others
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. Following
to
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apply
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China, the other Asia Pacific and India are
next
to
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. The Rich Asia-Pacific has
lowest
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the lowest
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population
percentages
. But the distribution of
wealth
 by region are following to
those
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that population ratio
those population ratios
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population
 ratio.
The
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apply
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North
America
 has around 34
percentages
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per cent
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 of global
wealth
.
Following to
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apply
show examples
North
America
, there are Europe and the Rich-Asia Pacific are followed.
This
 chart shows that the
population
 of
percentages
 and distribution of
wealth
 in the world are not relatively increasing. Even if
teh
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the
 country or continent
have
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has
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 a lot of
population
 compared to others, it shows that the
wealth
 is not following the
population
.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, percentages, wealth, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 5 times.
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