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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. it is therefore necessary for Governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is quite evident that consumption of unhealthy
food
 is rising among many countries.
This
 growth
also
 increasing the masses suffering from
health
the locus of feelings and intuitions
heart
 disorders.
However
, a section of thought believes that it is essential for Government to restrict
this
 by imposing
large
Suggestion
a large tax
tax
 on junk foods. To my mind, imposing a large amount of
tax
 on fast foods should restrict the local people in some limit.
For example
, a burger of 80Rs.
should
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Should
 charged with extra 50Rs.
of
Suggestion
Of
 penalty
should be cost
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should cost
 Rs.140 which should quite hard to consume daily for middle class population.
Furthermore
, high penance
also affect
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also affects
 the selling rates of junk foods.
For instance
 a restaurant earning little income
find
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finds
 very difficult to pay a large amount of
tax
. On the other side, it is
individuals
Suggestion
an individuals
the individuals
 own responsibility to decrease the intake of unhealthy foods. People must be conscious about their health and consume the
food
 containing nutritious values. To
site
make reference to
cite
 an illustration, family have to plan a proper balanced diet chart and try to follow that strictly.
Moreover
, population must be aware about the hygienic level of
food
 they eat.
Instead
 of imposing high
tax
,
Government
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the Government
 should have to rise the number of physical fitness centres in
locality
Suggestion
the locality
. Along with it, there should parks with free yoga classes.
In addition
 to it,
Government
Suggestion
the Government
Governments
 have to arrange some seminars which provide information about the diseases caused by consumption of fast foods and
also
 delivers lessons about
importance
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the importance
 of healthy
food
. T pen
down saying
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down, saying
, it is
Government responsibility
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a government responsibility
a Government responsibility
 to take the matter very
serious
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seriously
 and some strict actions.
However
, it is
also
 individuals personal concern about their health keeps them away from unhealthy
food but
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food, but
 Government concern should be more proficient.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • public health
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • heart disease
  • health outcomes
  • healthcare costs
  • consumer behavior
  • socio-economic backgrounds
  • ethical implications
  • public health campaigns
  • subsidies
  • regulations
  • nutritional content
  • healthier food options
  • government intervention
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