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Some people believe that all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Introducing a foreign
language
 very early in life at initiation of formal education is believed by some people to be more beneficial than later at secondary School. Both have their pros and cons which I will
further
 discu
ss but I be
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discuss, but
lieve giving a
child
 a chance to learn a foreign
language
 earlier in life is easier and enhances the
child
's ability to expand communication and interaction with other people with different languages. Encouraging a
child
 to learn foreign
language
 very early in life is easier than when delayed, according to a global study done on the human Brain, the Brain of a
Child
 tends to assimilate and process infor
mations fast
a message received and understood
information
er at
such
age
 and
this
 ability reduces with increasing
age
.
Furthermore
, learning different languages has the advantage of enhancing one's communication and interaction skills as it makes friendship and relationship easier, allowing a
child
 to learn it at a very early
age
 will give the
child
 opportunities to enjoy
such
 benefits earli
er which will
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earlier, which
 have posit
ive effect on t
Suggestion
a positive effect
he
child
's growth and knowledge; the
child
 wl be
a
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
ble to understand and learn from various foreign cultures through the media or directly.
On the other hand
, introducing the foreign
language
 at a more later stage will encourage the
child
 to adjust and learn more of the local
language
 and learn from the immediate environment better, it will promote interactions with the family and encourage community bonding.
Secondly
, most foreign
language
 resources require some initial educational skills which is be
tter acquired in t
Suggestion
are best acquired
are better acquired
he primary school, introducing the foreign
language
 after the elementary education will
further
 enhance learning of the foreign
language
. In conclusion, allowing a
child
 to learn foreign
language
 at a very early
age
 is more beneficial towards community bonding and should be encouraged by all.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Linguistic proficiency
  • Cultural awareness
  • Enhanced communication skills
  • Neuroplasticity
  • Language acquisition
  • Pedagogical methods
  • Curriculum constraints
  • Workload
  • Interdisciplinary connections
  • Adaptability
  • Personal experience
  • Critical thinking
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