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Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Tourism
 has become the leading industry across the world. Some argue that
this
 industry leads to conflicts among people coming from different nations. I disagree with
this
 notion to a significant extent, and in the following, I will give reasons to shed light on the enhanced understanding among people
as a result
 of
tourism
. On the one hand, it is true that cultural
diversification
Suggestion
diversity
 across the globe can cause some sort of
misunderstandings
Suggestion
misunderstanding
. As an illustration, consider the differences in the body language of people living in different places. While an expression
that is
 a sign of respect in one area, it can be interpreted as being offensive in another place.
However
, it is highly unlikely that
such
 differences would cause tensions, because nowadays people are more
informed thanks
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informed, thanks
 to the globalization;
therefore
, being open-minded results in more toleration.
Also
, it is worth mentioning that the
tourism
 is the precursor to the globalization, as many people are learning about traditions other than the local ones, through travelling to foreign countries.
On the other hand
, it is evident that
tourism
 has made people closer together, simply by considering the way tourists are welcomed in different places.
For instance
, international restaurants are ubiquitous in every country, offering ethnic foods of numerous nations. According to some experts, the increased number of
such
 restaurants is a reflective of the raised understanding.
That is
 to say, local people are more aware of the fundamental requirements of the visitors, and are making great effort to create one-of-a-kind experiences for them. In conclusion,
although
 some misunderstandings are likely to stem from discrepancies in the cultural values of different nations, the contribution of
tourism
 in better understanding is beyond dispute, regarding people's awareness as well as their hospitality.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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