The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.
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The chart illustrates how often people in the USA at in fast food restaurants, shown between the period
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2003 and 2013.
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for those going once a week and once or twice a month showed the highest percentage across the three time periods. With 2006 and 2013 hitting well above 30%. In relation to the ones attending several
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a week and a few
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a year,the number that ate at fast food dinners several
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a week
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slightly similar
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that of the latter. Significant differences in proportion were reflected in 2016
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a fifth went
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fast joints,
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the
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for a few
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a year, which is at 15%. For the modes in
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and never, they were almost the same, depicting a small minority of under 5%, with a peak in 2003 for both and similarities in proportion for the two in 2006 and 2013 respectively.
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