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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The advent and popularity of online
search
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 engines
such
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 as Google and Yahoo have revolutionised the way we
search
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information
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 in the modern times. To complement, the easy availability of the
internet
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 and the smart devices has
also
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 increased the accessibility
to
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of
 the
information
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.
However
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, while I believe that it is important for a person to be inquisitive and curious to look out for
information
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, I agree that the
internet
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 has greatly increased the availability and has significantly improved the access of
information
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.
Moreover
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, the social media websites
such
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 as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, etc.
are
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Are
 working as a platform to provide the
information
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 in a much more interesting and suitable manner.
For instance
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, the younger generations prefer to read the news on Twitter
instead
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 of reading a newspaper or watching the news updates on the TV.
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, people find it much easier to
search
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 about a recent event on the
internet
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instead
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 of waiting for it to be broadcasted
in
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with
 the news. These social media websites not only provide the whereabouts of friends and
family but
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family, but
also
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 share the latest and greatest updates from all across the world. In my experience,
this
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 is a great feature of
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internet as
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the internet, as
the internet as
 it has enabled us to access updates from all over the world and has not kept us restricted to our local TV channels and newspapers.
Moreover
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, the easy availability of smart devices and affordable
internet
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 is making the
information
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 quite accessible as people can now
search
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 the web for the
information
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 that they need whenever they want to.

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