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Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel fare in the future. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

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In the current scenario, travelling across the
country
 has changed drastically as
compare
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compared
 to
past
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the past
. It is often claimed that most individuals think there will be a depletion in the
flight
 tariff in the forthcoming era. I completely agree that
decrease
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the decrease
 in air fares is
positive development
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a positive development
 because people come closer, hike in
ecocnomy
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the economy
economy
, mixing of culture and frequent travels could be possible. To
emabark
go on board
embark
embarked
 upon, decrease in
flight
 prices will narrow the
boundry
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundary
boundaries
 across the
country
 border and people would able to meet their loved ones. They can share their feelings as well as
cheerish
be fond of; be attached to
cherish
cherished
cherishes
 the old memories and connect with new
friends which
Accept comma addition
friends, which
 won't be possible if the fare haven't decline.
In addition
,
whenevere
at whatever time
whenever
whenever e
two
 countries connect with each other their economy will arouse so that demand for import and export will not only cultivate
country
's GDP (Gross Domestic Product) but individuals can
also
 starve with the betterment of the infrastructure. To
epitome
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epitomize
,
survey
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a survey
 conducted by Divya Baskar reveals that 82% hike in the
economy
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economic
economical
 growth occurs when
country
's connect with the international markets. Moving
Frurther
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
, Culture
has been becoming
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has become
 similar in the most countries around the globe since
two
 years back.
However
, before it was difficult to communicate between
two
 nations but now people speak with ease because of
same laungauge trend
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the same language trend
same language trend
 all over the world.
Moreover
, decrease in air fares will enhance the scope of expanding business beyond a
country
.
Hence
,
businessman
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a businessman
businessmen
 may frequently plan their trip as it will save the cost;
also
 collaboration with new companies new companies in the aborad will be possible. To illustrate, article written by Mr. Mukesh Ambani
disclose
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discloses
 that business could only be expanded if the government subsidize the cost of travelling to spendable amount. For now he is the top ten richest
person
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people
 because of support from
high
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higher
 authorities for reducing the cost of
flight
 price. To recapitulate, mentioned above thought
such
 as connecting family members,
increase
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increases
an increase
 in
financial syatem
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the financial system
financial system
financial systems
, merging
two
 nations moral values and often journeys for business purpose will tend towards positive development because of reducing the
flight
 prices.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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