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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

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Nowadays, the problem of overpopulation in
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
counter
 areas has been
received
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receiving
 attention from public.
This
 essay will discuss about the reason which relates
with
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to
 job demands and suggest a solution that are relocated companies and manufacturing areas to rural sites. There are many reasons for that problem, yet the main is that people travel to big
cities to looking for
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cities looking for
 job opportunities. Since, nowadays, there are various companies located in
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 places, they recruit thousands workers every year. In fact, in order to
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 their families, people living in
lacking
the act of locking something up to protect it
locking
 off
jobs
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job
 areas have to move to
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
centres
 where have various job offers, leading to get over
inhabitances
a person who inhabits a particular place
inhabitants
 in many major cities. Take DongNai where is far
away 100km
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away, 100km
form
a giver or sender
from
 Ho Chi Minh city as an example, according to
report
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reports
 from the government, in 2018, the percentage of young people live and work in another city increased by 1% compared with 2018. Encouraging companies or organization move to rural areas, which is considered as the best solution. By having local jobs, citizens will stay
at
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in
 their hometown
instead
 of moving to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 places.
This
 means that there is a significant decrease in the number of people who migrate due to developing their careers,
as a
result stressful
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result, stressful
 about population in big cities will fall down as well.
For instance
, in 2017, new policies were applied in HaGiang which attacked investments
form
a giver or sender
from
 many organizations, that help local people have more jobs as well as enhance their economy. In conclusion,
although
 the main reason is that people travel to
city centers
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the city centre
city centre
 to have more opportunities for that career
paths
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path
, by encouraging more companies move to country sites where full of employees will help the situation better.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • Migration
  • Sustainable development
  • Infrastructure
  • Population density
  • Urban sprawl
  • Urban planning
  • Renewable energy
  • Family planning
  • Rural economies
  • Public transport
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  • Healthcare access
  • Educational facilities
  • Employment opportunities
  • Regulations
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