Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Nowadays companies are ready to do anything to encourage people to buy their products or
use
their services.
However
, I would argue that some of
adverts
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the adverts
and the way they are represented are inappropriate and have negative effects on
society
.
To begin
, one argument that can be put forward against some advertising methods, is their strategy
on
Suggestion
of
for
targeting children.
In other words
, some adverts aim younger generations in order to indirectly force their parents but their products. When,
for example
, companies
use
children's
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
characters in an advertisement, they know that
this
way
draw
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draws
youngster's attention and they become fond of
advert
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the advert
; now they pester their parents to purchase what was being advertised, even if they do not need that at all. Another way of tempting children is using a catchy song and child actors in the advertisements. Children easily attract to a simple and rhythmic song and remember it. In
such
cases
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cases, then
then
advertisement could be unethical because they exploit honest and immature mind of children.
In addition
, sometimes companies benefit from what is popular
inn
a unit of length equal to one twelfth of a foot
in
the
society
to entice
public
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the public
toward their products. We can see lots of commercials every day on TV or billboards in the street with
appearance
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the appearance
of a famous athlete or celebrity.
Such
advert usually just want to persuade
society
to
use
their brand, telling them that their products are being used by prominent individuals.
Besides
from not being informative, these kind of ads
promote
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promotes
artificial wants in people; people, as a consequence, are enticed to buy their products to enhance their self-image, even there is not any necessity in buying them. These
type
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types
of advertising
therefore
could be seen as fraudulent that manipulates people's mind. In conclusion,
although
there are advertisements which are very informative and honest about their products, there are some that just want to persuade and wrongly convince
society
to buy and
use
their products and services, so I surely see them as unethical and unacceptable.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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