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I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented.While the dining table looks exquisite, I am facing issue with it being slippery.

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I am writing to you to express my displeasure with furnitures in your apartment which we have rented. While the dining table looks exquisite, It has problems making it difficult to be used If you could not remember me, I am Sabari from India and I recently moved into the flat opposite to yours.
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, During your
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 visit to my apartment, we had a long discussion on the pet related rules enforced by the flat members association. As mentioned earlier, The dining table is slippery due to which every time a utensil is placed, it slides off.I think the issue is with the texture of the wood on the table top which has eroded owing to its age. Would you be able to send a carpenter to look into the issue? I request you to have the furniture repaired at the earliest.
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, if it can not be repaired, kindly have the wooden part replaced. Thank you for being considerate.
Yours
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 faithfully, Sabari Raja A R

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