Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that
relocating
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relocates
is relocating
large
scales
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scale
businesses
such
as companies, industrial organizations and the people working for them
to
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in
the rural area could help reduce
traffic
congestion and accommodation issues.
However
, I disagree with
this
viewpoint because as much as people still commute to
work
on a daily basis and the number of vehicles that apply on the
road
does not reduce,
traffic
and housing challenges will not be resolved.
To begin
with,
although
movies factories would create more space to build more houses for people to live, commuting daily to the rural area where they
work
still results to
traffic
in peak hours.
This
means that employees who
work
in these remote areas would
had
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have
to face the hassle of being stuck on their way to
work
. In Anambra State,
for example
, people live in Onitsha while they
work
in Umuchu factories. Despite these
factory
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factories
is
inside
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in
a village, there is still house shortages in town and
also
,
traffic
congestions every morning and evening which
causes
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cause
stress to the employee. Clearly, relocating the industries did not solve
traffic
and
accomodation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodation
issues.
Furthermore
, provided the people
continues
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continue
are continuing
buying cars to help them transport conveniently,
traffic
congestions will not reduce.
In other words
, the
road
will not contain the same volume of cars in
transit which
Accept comma addition
transit, which
it
initially
contains even if companies are relocated. To illustrate,
survey
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the survey
shows that there is an increase in sales of automobiles and car owners confirmed that the primary aim of buying cars is to ease stress especially while going to
work
.
Consequently
, increasing the
traffic
on the
road
despite relocating large scale businesses. In conclusion, I
strong
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strongly
refute the idea that moving companies and industries to
romote
located far away spatially
remote
promote
areas would reduce
traffic
and housing shortages. Provided people have to go to
work
on a daily basis and the number of
vehicle
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vehicles
on the
road
is on the increase
,
Accept space
,
then
there will be
traffic
and house shortages.
Therefore
,
that is
not the solution to the problem.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • housing problems
  • countryside
  • large companies
  • factories
  • employees
  • urban areas
  • land availability
  • relocate
  • stimulate economic development
  • challenges
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • rural areas
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