Many animals are facing extinction in the wild. Why is this happening? What can be done to protect them?

The depreciation of the ecosystem has been a major concern recently. And worthy of notice is the alarming reduction of wild animals.
This
essay will analyse the causes of
this
worrisome trend which include rapid urbanisation of rural areas and proliferation of
game
hunters and proffer possible solutions to abate
this
problem. Turning to the causes of extinction of wild animals.
Firstly
, rapid urbanisation of
rural area
Suggestion
the rural area
rural areas
is an important one.
For instance
, with overcrowding in the cities, people now move en masse to settle down in
countrysides
Suggestion
the countrysides
.
This
form of migration as
seen
Suggestion
is seen
in Alaska, where owls were
annhilated
destroyed completely
annihilated
often leads to encroachment of the ecological niche of these animals and subsequent deforestation in order to get
timbers
Suggestion
the timbers
to build houses and furnitures.
Consequently
, wild animals tend to suffer and eventually die due to failure of
acclimatisation
Suggestion
the acclimatisation
of new habitat.
In addition
,
increase
Suggestion
an increase
in the number of
game
hunters is another issue.
This
was established in eastern
Australia
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Australia, for
for example
, where
game
hunters were solely fingered in the extinction of Koala, a tree-dwelling bear. Despite the above challenges, there are possible means to protect these animals. Perhaps the most important is the creation of
menagerie
Suggestion
the menagerie
. A case in point is the national
game
reserve in Nairobi, which has greatly contributed to the conservation of animals like giraffes, zebras and ostriches.
Also
, enforcement of penalties for deforestation.
This
plan
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plan, for
for
example has
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example, has
been of benefit in Nigeria, where indiscriminate felling of trees is rampant. And as
such
,
this
act was criminalised and culprits are made to pay huge fines or sentence to jail thereby curbing the menace. In conclusion,
this
essay explained the reasons behind
annihilation
Suggestion
the annihilation
of
quarry which
Suggestion
the quarry, which
the quarry which
a quarry which
quarries which
include the increase rate of migration from urban to countrysides and the negative impacts of hunters. And solutions of zoological gardens and outlawing of deforestation.
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